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Monday, March 22, 2010


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BRAVO! Wonderuflly done! Damn fine read, and welcome aboard.

Hot damn.

(so to speak)

An absolute powerhouse of a piece.

Good Lord, that was the stuff.

Oh my GOD. Oh my GOD! I loved this so hard. So much.


and also?



ha ha ha ha! "I TOLD you not to say my name. Sheesh."
I would love it if that would happen!

Great post!

This is why I make my wife answer the door. (Superbly written - thoroughly engrossing!)

An auspicious debut that conjures up MP & The Holy Grail:

GOD: "And don't apologize. Every time I try to talk to someone it's 'sorry this' and 'forgive me that' and 'I'm not worthy.'... It's like those miserable Psalms -- they're so depressing. Now knock it off!"

Oh god, Kevin, I am DYING laughing.

You can't write fiction? Yeah, in the same way you can't rock the corporate ladder right?

This was brilliant. Makes me wanna sing H to the izz-o, V to the izz-a.

I only asked you to make me LAUGH, dammit, not make me hee-haw so loud I woke up my sleeping children!

My favorite, beyond the comedic suspense, is this: "As the world reduced like a cheap burgundy sauce over the heat of the lake of holy fire and brimstone swelling around them..."

Cheap burgundy sauce, indeed. Visually stimulating, the entire piece.


Honestly? Lots of words freak me out.
And yo, so many brilliant ones here...

Looks like you have got some chops, you should use them. Very well done.

This was a fantastic read. Loved it.

How'd you learn to put all of those cool words together? I was spellbound I tell ya.

Freakily spellbound.

Bravo my friend. Onward you go....

I never imagined God saying 'sheesh'.

Chops indeed.

Simmered to perfection in cheap burgundy sauce.


Love it! Still laughing.

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